Sitting on my building’s terrace,
admiring the beauty which Earth cherish,heart encountering a breath of fresh air,
undergoing rejuvenation in the nature’s snare.
blimey! She is rising on the brink,
looking utterly depressed and sick.
Struck by fright, I sprang,
and caught her by her hand,“ever perceived what you were doing?” I said,
crying even more harder she stand instead.
Again, I asked, for its cause,
gloomy and extremely blue she was,“why do I always have to fail?
why do I always have to wail?”
“Who told you to wail after having been failed?
in ‘failed’, ‘learning from mistakes’ is laid,ever pondered what would happen to your family?
after the suicide which you were attempting.
How heartbroken your parents would be,
blaming themselves for your deed,bringing you up with loads of love,
for just getting misery from what you’d have done.
Life has ups as well as downs,
no stage meant for you to frown,be strong in every sphere of life,
face the hurdles with a fearless mind.
Always believe in yourself,
never degrade your inner self,as after every dim-dark night,
the blazing light makes everything right.
Hope and faith must dominate you,
be positive in every work you do,work as smart as you can,
and you’ll be as best as you can.
Always pursue your biggest dream,
be consistent like an ever-flowing stream,you have the whole right of choice,
change failure into success to make the noise”.
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Wonderfully penned.God Bless you and may your thoughts start thinking beyond the boundaries.
ReplyDeleteOne more beautiful poem. Well said that success should not be measured by just exam marks or one such aspect. Life is too short to spend worrying, everyone should find what interest them and work hard to excel in that. When sad or depressed, always talk to your family/friends
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. Yes, well said that exams are not the only tool of weighing success. Everyone should pursue their passion. Family/friends will guide us when we are despondent.
DeleteAmazing...
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DeleteAmazing work. Very well written. The road to success is indeed not straight. It do has bumps, cracks and ridges. We must never lose hope at any stage of life.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot. Yes, we must be hopeful and optimistic in every sphere of life.
DeleteBeautifully explained!...keep it up...
ReplyDeleteThank you so much
DeleteThe well-known maxim, "While there is life there is hope," has a deeper meaning in reverse: "While there is hope there is life."
ReplyDeleteHope comes first, life follows. Hope gives power to life.
Keep up the good work beta !!
Thanks a lot. Yes, while there is hope there is life:)
DeleteGood one, as you publish more, topic and content as well are more fulfilling and matured. All should know success and failure are all part of life. Keep trying as there is always that another chance and be content with what one has
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot. Yes, every dark night is followed by a bright morning :)
DeleteVery well written Muskan
ReplyDeleteso deep thoughts!
can't agree more that you learn from your failures and they gain experience from it and march forward; such things can only make you strong
Keep it up Muskan; very creative.
Thank you. Yes, indeed failure is the stepping stone to success. We must never lose hope as there is light at the end of the tunnel :)
DeleteBeautifully explained!
ReplyDeleteSo expressive!
Hope and optimism should always dominate us
Thanks a lot...yes, we must always believe in ourselves..
DeleteSo expressive !!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you
DeleteJust nailled itππ
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